Draft of Public Argument

Here is the rough draft of my public argument. The format is a Prezi presentation, so please comment on this post with any concerns or tips you may have. My goal is to make it an informative, persuasive news article so any suggestions you have on that will be helpful. Please watch for sentence flow as well as grammar mistakes, and anything else you see. Thank you.

You can view a draft of my project by clicking this link.

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